First of all thank you both...  Marius Surleac [Jun 9, 2008]
on "Muse" - Poetry by Marius Surleac

  Peaceful, silence invading the shape of...  Marius Surleac [Jun 9, 2008]
on "Fearsome" - Poetry by Edilberto González Trejos

You know how to put a...  Marius Surleac [Jun 9, 2008]
on "The lonely painting" - Poetry by Vicleanu Mihaita

In the sixth stanza I think...  Marius Surleac [Jun 9, 2008]
on " Take me with you" - Poetry by Muresan Laura

I'm glad that you saw my...  Ionuþ Popa [Jun 9, 2008]
on "Sonnet 1" - Poetry by Ionut Popa

I read the Spanish version as...  Marius Surleac [Jun 9, 2008]
on "Moon Song" - Poetry by Edilberto González Trejos

As Willy said, the end of...  Marius Surleac [Jun 9, 2008]
on "radiOde" - Poetry by Lee Ann Hardt

  I sense a Shakespearean breeze floating...  Marius Surleac [Jun 9, 2008]
on "Sonnet 1" - Poetry by Ionut Popa

  Now we talk about something much...  Marius Surleac [Jun 9, 2008]
on "Mute Icons" - Poetry by George Mihaila

Indeed daily events - there a...  Marius Surleac [Jun 9, 2008]
on "Daily Events" - Poetry by mihai iftimie

I see some passion here, desire...  Marius Surleac [Jun 9, 2008]
on "Your lips" - Poetry by Santorelli Iovino

“a kiss is full of pleasures...  Marius Surleac [Jun 9, 2008]
on "A kiss is just a kiss" - Poetry by Santorelli Iovino

“that opens its way through the...  Marius Surleac [Jun 9, 2008]
on "Myself" - Poetry by Santorelli Iovino

Yes, this is wordplay and it...  John Willy Kopperud [Jun 9, 2008]
on "A dreaded consequence" - Poetry by John Willy Kopperud

“hope and delight” instead of “an...  Marius Surleac [Jun 9, 2008]
on "Pray" - Poetry by Santorelli Iovino

“goodbye” instead of “goodby”.  Marius Surleac [Jun 9, 2008]
on "Sad girl" - Poetry by Santorelli Iovino

“it’s” instead of “its”, “omelette” instead...  Marius Surleac [Jun 9, 2008]
on "We cannot make an omelette without breaking the egg" - Personals by knownot-toknowall

in the subtitle "and" instead of...  Marius Surleac [Jun 9, 2008]
on "Looking in the mirror,,," - Poetry by mazHur

I like how you pointed the...  Marius Surleac [Jun 9, 2008]
on " Augury for the New Year" - Poetry by mazHur

There is "new roses and lilies"...  Marius Surleac [Jun 9, 2008]
on " This Earth is a Killer Wave !" - Poetry by mazHur

Thanks a lot, John, for your...   mazHur [Jun 9, 2008]
on "The Last Visit" - Poetry by mazHur

I wouldn't want you to think...  Lee Ann Hardt [Jun 9, 2008]
on "A dreaded consequence" - Poetry by John Willy Kopperud

This is without doubt one of...  Lee Ann Hardt [Jun 8, 2008]
on "the way" - Poetry by Andrei Horia Gheorghiu

...it's surely a good thing that...  John Willy Kopperud [Jun 8, 2008]
on "radiOde" - Poetry by Lee Ann Hardt

....in conveying criticism of greedy fish...  John Willy Kopperud [Jun 8, 2008]
on "The Last Visit" - Poetry by mazHur

...skilled in describing feelings of shame...  John Willy Kopperud [Jun 8, 2008]
on "tooth fragments" - Poetry by Lee Ann Hardt

Thank you for the comments and...  Lee Ann Hardt [Jun 8, 2008]
on "radiOde" - Poetry by Lee Ann Hardt

..and your right, our fingers hurt(us)...  John Willy Kopperud [Jun 7, 2008]
on "contemporary idols" - Poetry by George Mihaila

  Sharp poetry, there is an inner...  Edilberto González Trejos [Jun 7, 2008]
on "contemporary idols" - Poetry by George Mihaila

  this is perfect for me and...  Edilberto González Trejos [Jun 7, 2008]
on "Lightyears of..." - Poetry by John Willy Kopperud

You are sharp indeed WILLY... Please...  Edilberto González Trejos [Jun 7, 2008]
on "Fearsome" - Poetry by Edilberto González Trejos

Thanks for your comments amigo. This...  Edilberto González Trejos [Jun 7, 2008]
on "Moon Song" - Poetry by Edilberto González Trejos

...is not romancing the stone an...  John Willy Kopperud [Jun 6, 2008]
on "Fearsome" - Poetry by Edilberto González Trejos

  ...seems perfectly right to me! There's...  John Willy Kopperud [Jun 6, 2008]
on "Moon Song" - Poetry by Edilberto González Trejos

  Luminita, great translation, for I see...  Edilberto González Trejos [Jun 5, 2008]
on "With Poetry Down the Stairs" - Poetry by Preoteasa Marinela

...with some biographical facts on your...  John Willy Kopperud [Jun 5, 2008]
on "radiOde" - Poetry by Lee Ann Hardt

...on the list! Willy  John Willy Kopperud [Jun 5, 2008]
on "radiOde" - Poetry by Lee Ann Hardt

...and that's a wonderful conclusion to...  John Willy Kopperud [Jun 5, 2008]
on "radiOde" - Poetry by Lee Ann Hardt

...and I really enjoyed the dremy...  John Willy Kopperud [Jun 5, 2008]
on "Muse" - Poetry by Marius Surleac

There are two parallel levels in...  John Willy Kopperud [Jun 5, 2008]
on "Lightyears of..." - Poetry by John Willy Kopperud

Thank you both for the hearty...  Lee Ann Hardt [Jun 5, 2008]
on "hummed poem" - Poetry by Lee Ann Hardt

Takes time to understand, but it...  Sydney Krivenko [Jun 5, 2008]
on "Lightyears of..." - Poetry by John Willy Kopperud

Wow, I like it, it takes...  Sydney Krivenko [Jun 5, 2008]
on "Muse" - Poetry by Marius Surleac

Hi, good to be back! Thanks...  Sydney Krivenko [Jun 5, 2008]
on "Embroidery" - Poetry by Sydney Krivenko

...I enjoyed this one is that...  John Willy Kopperud [Jun 4, 2008]
on "Daily Events" - Poetry by mihai iftimie

...to describe human sensations. I really...  John Willy Kopperud [Jun 4, 2008]
on "hummed poem" - Poetry by Lee Ann Hardt

The pleasure of the ruined feelings,...  Marius Surleac [Jun 4, 2008]
on "winter in ruins" - Personals by Ravendark Scar Furiel

...as Marius expresses. I must add...  John Willy Kopperud [Jun 4, 2008]
on "With Poetry Down the Stairs" - Poetry by Preoteasa Marinela

Your poem reveals a strong feeling...  John Willy Kopperud [Jun 4, 2008]
on "Embroidery" - Poetry by Sydney Krivenko

Great poem Sydney - I can...  Marius Surleac [Jun 4, 2008]
on "Embroidery" - Poetry by Sydney Krivenko

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It’s all about perspective. And a little distance I guess. Some things are just better when viewed from afar. Take my face for example. If I sit down on my chair and look at my skin in the mirror wi

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