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Marius, a beautiful chain of pearls......  Corina Gina Papouis [Jan 23, 2010]
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Simply wonderful. The images created are...  Marius Surleac [Jan 23, 2010]
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with johnny dep as the mad...  Corina Gina Papouis [Jan 23, 2010]
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- and I must say that...  John Willy Kopperud [Jan 23, 2010]
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I see now that the article...  John Willy Kopperud [Jan 23, 2010]
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Thanks, Corina. On the area of...  Cãlin Sãmãrghițan [Jan 23, 2010]
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Hi Calin. I like your poem...  Marius Surleac [Jan 23, 2010]
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find either of the forms ok...I...  Corina Gina Papouis [Jan 23, 2010]
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Thanks John, that's the advice I...  Cãlin Sãmãrghițan [Jan 23, 2010]
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...am now looking forward even more...  Corina Gina Papouis [Jan 23, 2010]
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-excluding the identification of the object....  John Willy Kopperud [Jan 23, 2010]
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  -all wrapped in a beautiful frame....  John Willy Kopperud [Jan 23, 2010]
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- the acknowledgment of mathematics is...  John Willy Kopperud [Jan 23, 2010]
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-and on some occasions I do...  John Willy Kopperud [Jan 23, 2010]
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That's the poem of my entire...  Cãlin Sãmãrghiþan [Jan 23, 2010]
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this is one of my favourite...  Corina Gina Papouis [Jan 23, 2010]
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  I might choose to tell you,...  Corina Gina Papouis [Jan 23, 2010]
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flawless poem, great insight and beautifully...  Corina Gina Papouis [Jan 23, 2010]
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  a masterpiece! a text taking the...  Corina Gina Papouis [Jan 23, 2010]
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....a few minor polishing touches needed:...  Corina Gina Papouis [Jan 23, 2010]
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"I never been"  Luminita Suse [Jan 22, 2010]
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a friend of mine said "it's...  dan marius [Jan 22, 2010]
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  what seems rough-and-ready here is the...  Veronica Valeanu [Jan 21, 2010]
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-it may work, but the last...  John Willy Kopperud [Jan 20, 2010]
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I've put the comment but it...  Patrik Voicu [Jan 19, 2010]
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I think it's better, so thanks...  Patrik Voicu [Jan 19, 2010]
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It’s all about perspective. And a little distance I guess. Some things are just better when viewed from afar. Take my face for example. If I sit down on my chair and look at my skin in the mirror wi

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